I think that this is a really great song. i actually like the drop off after the build up. its like this really energetic part, then you take a quick break, and then it goes into the same melody but with the dissonant chords...which i enjoy a lot. Excellent job man! one of my favorites.
haha No I would just mess it up. If i were going to remix it I would just take those 4 bars out and that would hardly feel right for me. Really, its a stellar tune man.
I like it this a lot. The only thing I would recommend is to maybe use the machiniste to get cleaner percussion sounds, mostly for the groove in the beginning section. Really nice though.
I ask of you one thing only, that you fix the build up drop with the 8th note bassdrum crescendo. I really think it should go straight into the next part and drop on the first beat after the build up instead of having the noise thing die down. I know its your song and all, but I really love the energy of that part and I think that pause just kills the anticipation. This is like an A and it could be an A+. :P then again I'm just some random dude on the webs.