And I think its too much for this track. Just like true delusional thinking, it is not always painful or harsh. At least that's how I'm justifying it :P
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: Do you mean Db? (there is no D-minor note LOL). Its D-Natural because it's an inverted Bdim triad. The Db does give it more tension. What's funny is that I think it gives off too dark a vibe, so I prefer the D-natural. I might use that triad combo later though because I did like the sound of the Db there.
This track can now be open for criticism. I am in much better space overall :). I've listened to it some more and almost think that if I refine it, it could be as good as Brutal Relationship or better.
Thanks all. If I don't think about it much, it is fine, but I keep getting reminded of one problem or another on the way to getting my daughter help and her current status. It's also a waiting game. Fortunately we have at least one doctor who hasn't wait-listed or said no to us, but they're 2 hours away. But at least we'll see if we can get her on some med management to help her.
If nothing else, you're getting music from me, good/bad/indifferent. I'll just try to get listening again to everyone else's stuff as much as I can.