I worked pretty hard on this and had a lot of fun making it. Please fav if you like it and please give me feedback on how to improve. Listen to the very end please
oh yeah yours is totally different from his your is like delune a lot smoother than his you drums have more impact your melodies is a whole lot smoother his bells are or sound in the back might be better than yours but overall it is totally different from his he probably have his heinsberg volume up tremendously overall yours better lol in my opinion I like the way his wobbs back and forth though but nvm that this is about your track lol good job
yo nice track homie nice beginning hmm(I am listening to it) quick drums like that,good melody,the loudness is perfect that melody at
00:55
could be more smooth the ding like a triangle could be more blending in with the beat nice melodies man super good the piece at
1:56
could more smooth as well but overall so far it is great in my opinion great start at
2:33
so smooth from2:00 to
3:00
the bell at
3:09
could be more in tuned or blended in with the melody more overall great