that ring sound effect is quite loud and sharp. and i think the 808 would benefit from a dip in the lower mids cause it's got too much bark imo. let the bass/sub freqs shine so you can feel it in your skull. gives the 808 less ohmph and more umph!! it'll also push the 808 back slightly in imaginary space and add some depth to your track. and that kick's clipping hella, sorta ruins the atmosphere you've created with the pads