I am really sorry, you seem to be a nice guy, but I promised undiplomatic honesty for the tracks posted on my wall: This track does not have a single unique attibute. Do something of your own, or start a conversation with me about other things, but leave me alone with this nonsense.
Fixed most the things you guys said added a reverb for the little piano part in the beginning lowered my tag samething with the 808 changed how the kicks sound like and yea
Everything sounds kinda muddy, and yes, that tag is way too loud, that's not good. Everything sounds lowpassed and that doesn't sound good inn this track. I like what you were going for, good job. :)
kinda rushed, I may critique better later, sorry. xD