Lol oh snap bad idea lol. i got a desktop for that main reason. lag issues. thats why i didnt make anything for a couple years till i copuld get a good one
That's some nice leading man! The harmony has a lot of forward momentum - so much, in fact, that repeating the first eight bars for the second eight bars feels like a sudden jerk backward. The harmony will flow a lot better if you change up the second eight bars. You can change the voicings, or you might even change the chords. The reason this is important is that the chord you end the eighth bar on has lots of forward tension, which implies there's more to the "musical thought."