it's a good start, just needs some volume and mixing fixes that withdecay already went over at length.
the vocals hurt so bad and i dont know why theyre panned like that but it makes it worse i cant give any more feedback because im genuinely afraid listening will cause hearing damage
well in that case i see two high end cuts back to back, if that isnt enough to tame the highs on that vocal you might just want to invest in a better mic
the audiotrack with just the eq / panorama on it, is that the vocal chain? cause if so it looks like youre boosting the hell out of the highs and lows when clearly it doesnt need that lol