drums need work. I can barely feel that kick coming in at 00:23 , let alone hear it! your sound FX are too quiet and your lead synth is too loud. The sounds need to be balanced better. Your snare does not slap, and it needs to slap.
yeah the more I listen to it, the more it just sounds like the synths are too loud and everything else is too quiet. Try balancing things out on your centroid