That's my first entry lol x)
I hope that I will win the best place of the winners, because I believe in myself lol XD
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I'm going to create a second entry, which will be future beis or something, so be patient c:
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...try using chords or even octaves on your lead synths to give them more width and fullness in your song, and slap some stereo effect on it to really spread it out.
this tracks sounds good overall, and I loved how you used the vocals, but I feel it's lacking a bit in song design and sound design. It just needs more things going on, and maybe a second chorus to spice things up. Nice job though! Best of luck! :)
hmmm sounds good so far ( 00:57 )
01:08 I like when the hi hats come in, but after that the drum track is still a bit lacking...I would recommend running your hi hats through a pulseDelay and play with the settings til you find something you like! this helps fill space in your track and creates a feeling of variety in your drums. you can activate and deactivate these effects and instruments for mixing later.
more drum sounds plz
also...
the lazers SHOULD be on 1 eye because you can only see one... it looks kinda funky
AYY, My track got charted
Thank you so much <3333333
UNPOPULAR OPINION: the vocals dont match
but NICE
oooooffff vocals aren't in the right key tho hmmmmmmmmm
Umm the original key is in B major, which I dont think you changed right? Abandoned is in F# Major, so they're in different keys. Just do like I said andtranspose everything down 5 notes, it'll work with the vocals trust me. Also, the tempo os not same lmao
Wait, but all my notes are in F# major
I just don't what is the key of your vocals
if I'm not wrong, the vocals are in F# Major and the instrumental is in B Major. That means you just gotta transpose all your notes 5 notes down
Republished
"Abandoned" vocals added
New cover thanks to me
also, really nice reese bass there hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehhehehe
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