This is a draft in which was not supposed to be published, but my vocals got better, so I decided that I could do this song, in which I was practicing my vibrato.
Definitely a good guitar song. There is one thing in the modern singer songwriter or else music I observed which I don't like that much. From second one to the end there is no break from vocals. Same with po9t for example. It sounds restless and a little overbearing in a desperate way. Maybe thats the feeling you all want to transport but it's not my cup of tea. Leave room for the music or write a book instead
I gotta disagree with po9t's point. Personally feel like there's so much value in the unspoken in lyrics. Yes, you need something else engaging beforehand or after, but being restlessly bombarded with vocals is exhausting, at least to me. Especially if there are a LOT of lyrics. I like it when the voice is used more like an instrument with longer ahs, ohs and such. Not every second needs to say something.