The melodies are uplifting and dreamy but some of the transitions in between the starting sections could use much more work instrumentational. I don't really like the space pad however I would recommend maybe replacing that with the pulv pads because it's much more softer and subtle. It just sounds like the sound is really harsh in a chill-like setting I guess. But I do like that lead. That's really cool. Make the hi-hats more noticeable in the mix by brightning the high end.
Also the kick and snare could use a touch of quasar reverb. I feel like it really needs it for this genre. The lead at
03:37
seems to be giving off high resonances when the notes play so I would recommend carving those frequencies out with a curve or graphical eq that way it can fit in more. But I do like the sound design a lot. It's very professional. There are some sections though that don't really resolve but that's alright. I'm aware this is one of your older songs too which I never heard of
wOah~! This is so beauitful!! I love how calming it is! Makes me think about someone dancing around outside, smiling, and feeling happy after and during the storm! Just, feeling happy! I love it! <333