The
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transition sounds too sudden. I think you should add more stuff on that section so it can flow nicely with the song. The hi-hats could use some saturation if there isn't already some. I think the kickdrum needs more body to it. So probably give it more mid and low range. Overall good snippet.
Realizing that this is a test, I think this is pretty dope especially how roomy the 808 is, since it's pretty much the spotlight of the track. If I could recommend any changes, maybe a "bigger" hi hat with some stereo enhancer and maybe some stereo detune as well. Without getting too deep into anything it sounds pretty dope to me