DANG ANOTHER CHART!
Hey, everyone, this is my first shot at something on this site I hope you all enjoy it. Also, help me figure out what genre this is my first time making something that sounds like this.
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Republished
Louder beat
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I suck at criticism, but i feel as tho ur pad sound does need work, However I also agree with what YITO says as far as u being experienced melodically speaking, but the main lead does get very repetitive. (I think the pad may be occupying to much lowend, i don't know, I suck)
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for this being your first ever track, this is actually very solid. im not gonna hold mixing and all those little things against you cause you’re new and it’s expected for that stuff to be kinda rough, but man while the melodies and pads are very simple, they’re quite clean. later in the track some lows/mids start clashing, but I’d say about the first 30 secs of the track, everything meshes pretty nicely
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Thank you for all the advice and respect. I have made another track if you want to check that one for me as well.
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btw atomic this man is the god on AT take his wisdom gratefully ^
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overall thoughts though, I think you did great here! you seem to know melodies well and what’s in key/what’s not. you do a great job of filling space (in most parts) while also making everything sound natural and not aimlessly thrown in. can’t wait to see what else you have store for us down the road cause you definitely have some talent, just need some time to adjust and learn :)
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The drums could definitely use some work but I love the synths, maybe try making ur own next time you never know when you could discover something really cool
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And sound design wise I'd recommend making the main melody synth more interesting, but you'll learn most of that during continuous practice. The claps could be put through a reverb. I can't really help you with the mixing. There are several muddy sections, however I don't have my headphones rn. Criticism aside, this has a lot of potential and you do too. Keep it up! I'm sure that you'll publish some great stuff in the future.
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You are pretty good. Melodically speaking, you seem to have some experience already. The melody is nice, however I'd recommend working on track structure, because I don't really hear too much of a pattern. Without having to make drops and buildups, you could add some swells or introduce one of the pad elements slowly and then resolve it. Also the repeating melody itself doesn't sound too repetitive in this case, yet I'd recommend a section either without the melody or changing some notes up
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Wow, it boosted up in likes and comments!
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Lots of clipping, but very very good, well done!
(Clipping is basically when 2 or more sounds/melodies go on top of one another and it makes it sound distorted)
Might I say, I love this melody!
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For the first track, this is extremely good. I see you published it several times to get it right too. It ain't easy making music it takes time and practice. You have potential my friend, I also love the photo you chose for the track.
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This is good
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sound design's kinda simple and generic
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Republished
Muted experimental lead
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melody's kinda cliche
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