i like this one! very cool industrial atmosphere. perhaps the percussion (specifically the hats/shakers) has some unintentionally out of balance high end that makes it feel louder than it actually is. everything else is very nice! the guitar-like sound is very well made!
Sorry Mircode, i am terrible at contributing to existing ideas. If I don't start the draft I never end up having any good ideas :/ how about I invite you to one when I have a good idea?