tbh there's a lot i could say. please don't hate me.
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the drums are way offbeat
i dont like the chords
whatever the thing is at the beginning where it goes in and out is not good
then again at 0:24 same thing
very repetitive
i don't hear a sub. could useone
sound design needs work, especially the bass since it sounds like just a constant sine wave
bass is 1 octave too high
i think the drum sample choices are good