hey, thx for sending this to me! I think it needs some work in the mixing side of things, but I actually like the direction this track is heading in. If the crackle has distortion, I would turn it down and throw on some stereo devices. the sounds at
1:50
and
2:31
need to be processed better with eq and blended with the track better with compression and effects like delay and reverb. don't get discouraged when others critique your stuff m8, you can always look at their comments as showing you ...
Honestly it all depends on what you like. .I have a certain taste in music my friend. Although I do like LOFI.. deep basslines and subtle ambience for sound fx. I'm going to say this though. Depending on how old we all are. Older folks just have a different taste in music sometimes than the younger crowd these days. I'm open minded but, I do have a preference. Nothing too crazy and loud and annoying sounding in the tracks. You have to listen for several min and some older people don't like it
I'm just being honest friend. I like the subtle vibes of the track up until around
1:50
when the melodic litte tune kicks in..I'm just not a fan of that sound. I do like the track up until that point though. I'm not a fan of the crackle sound all the way through it.. Just giving my honest opinion friend. I like suble tunes. lofi don't need sounds being overbearing on loudness. They need filters and compression and a subtle volume level if you ask me. Anyway...Ok I'm done..LOL