number seven
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worked on it for three days, and I'd say this is fairly good, criticism is accepted, I want to improve and know what and what not to do, I also wish to chart at least number four so if you like it, promote it!
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Faved just for the description honestly.
I like that you're proud. You totally deserve to be! This sounds really neat. There's so much emotion in this track i feel. I like the melodic aspect of this track. It reminds me of when i used to work with @EscapingReality and @WOLFEYE
Good job! Keep it up :)
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Of course this is your art and it is subjective, so you probably have your own thoughts and ideas about how you wanted this track to sound, and that's fine. Take my suggestions with a grain of salt as they say. If you have any further questions feel free to message me :)
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but I feel like the opposite would also be useful in that I feel like a breakdown section would be good to take the energy from all the way at top and bring it down a bit before you go back into the melody/strings. This can help with pacing, and keeping things interesting especially when you have a long track like this one
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As far as critiques go, I feel like there could be some improvement made in the quality of your mix, perhaps specifically in carving out your sounds so that they don't interfere with each other. The other thing I might suggest is in the composition, the structure of the song could use dome changes to keep things flowing.
You have these segments that build and build to this big release where all of the instruments play at once and it's very good
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Blend a bit more and this might be a preference thing but when I use this drum pattern I usually make the compression stronger. But good overall.
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Nice
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Number nine number nine number nine
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love it but the growls need to blend a bit more
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I like it. Not sure about the genre but I like it
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Well done :D
