first how is your computer alive and what the hell is that snapshot bro, also this track is 5x normal standards I think you should start a soundcloud or spotify, i really respect this work.
If you added more to the intro, it can definitely work. A piano counter melody and an entire drop-predrop would also be sick. There's too much of nothing in the intro, so cutting it into 2/3rds what it is may work better. The kick in the drop has a very harsh transient, it sounds thin. The kick isn't very good. I know I uploaded it, but I've since then made better kicks. I can send you a kick if you want. The growl also is way too stereo, the phaser on it is also a bit too much