Yes I know it's repetitive so I don't want to hear shit about it. So just enjoy it while it is okay, I'm still getting the hang of this genre!

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  • this so shitty

  • in a good way

  • this slapssssssssssssss ong

  • FIRE

  • YES SIR CHARTED!

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  • first i'll say the chord progression is cool and i like the sound it has --

    but that hihat is earpiercingly loud and shrill. i would definitely bring it down a few dB. there's also no bass, so it lacks much movement or energy. and ik you dont want to hear that it's repetitive but it feels like an unfinished idea; it doesnt go anywhere different enough to justify its almost 3 min runtime. some different sounding sections would make it a far more interesting track

    • Ok, I'll see what I can do

    • bet but it'll prolly have to be on Wednesday I gotta big test tmr

    • If you ever wanna collab, I can give you sum sauce

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  • ngl the reverb overlay chords in the background are too wet, maybe turn up dry and turn down wet, or reduce room size, cuz it was bleeding through. And also maybe add a sub bass if you wanna keep that heavy kick. 808s alr have a kick, so it'll punch too much. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

  • nice

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