now i've never actually taken part in the audiotool day thing before but i had already started working on this track and thought might as well submit or enter something, in all honesty i'm not hoping to win anything or become even in the top spots i just wanted to take part in such a great activity and thought that this sounded this most clean out of all my stuff haha :)
I like the chords you chose, and that little plucky is perfect. It'd be cool for this to have some more interesting percussion added, because right now it's kinda boring. (all this is just my opinion) still plenty of time to edit anything before the deadline. I also wish the intro was less long (1 minute) The bridge is quite nice tho. Yeah the "chorus" sounds pretty empty with only those kicks and occasional snare