Thank you
@yuki (archive) ☮
and
@Zir0h
for the most recent advice. I'm planning on reworking the entire song so it leads somewhere. There will be no more mixing done because at this point it is perfect the way it is. I'm now focused on the sound arrangement
hey! 'grats on the chart! Nice track, very fun, very happy-vibes. I love that synth melody and I think the composition is interesting, almost like it was built for vocals? *eyebrows eyebrows*
Would love to hear some improvement on those plucks though, try using an OTT and turn the resonance up on the synth controlling the sound, reduce any releases and put a light reverb on it to make it resonate (or you can you use the delay effect).
Some feedback I would give is that the delay and pluck at
01:35
have some really sharp resonances, which may just be the feedback of the delay. I would try to reduce those high frequencies. Also, I'd personally say that the track has some really solid and a good melody and the switch-up is good too, but it's not really leading anywhere, not sure how to say that otherwise. It's missing progression. As always though, props to the melody and the delay. They add a lot of interest.
Hm, perhaps the middle part could act more as a build-up to a drop, gradually increasing energy. So, I think it mostly needs song structure and elements that bind the track together more. Elements being added, removed, differences in energy. The intro already works well that way. It has a lot of potential.
This is really good. I suggest either pitching down the bass that comes in at
1:01
, or lowering the volume slightly and adding a sub sine with the same notes pitched down.