saturo kinda cooked but u need a dif preset and flow
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feedback ( for me satoru its my 3rd song my part was kinda bad)
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lab up w eli
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lmk if yall want the vocals so yall can make a beat to it ig
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part 1/verse 1 = @eli (@elixclusiv) 0:02 - 0:38
part 2/verse 2 = @[B.T.D] SxtoruHalo ✨(kun) 0:43 - 1:38
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0 listen if you want an honest opinion no rudeness or anything but the rhyming could be better
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0 ohh shii
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0 Aye bro rappin now. Good job @[B.T.D] SxtoruHalo ✨(kun)
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0 CLEEO RAPPING NOW
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0 hollup this actually kinda hawt
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0 GG's twin eli
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0 Republished
forgot to change the timeline
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0 my part was bad but its all good