I feel the drums are too loud in this mix, and the whole mix is a bit flat. I know there's not here, but it's at least a cohesive project. The loops being used are well chopped, and I like the strings playing in the background throughout most of the song. I would recommend trying to get your sounds more balanced in your mix.
Thanks a TON for the feedback! I quite literally havent gotten feedback this good in a while
I'll try and use these suggestions and comments for future tracks I make, since I'm still trying to improve on my style, but I'm really glad I've gotten feedback this clear & precise! :D