by the way, the gated kick is really nice. I like the section at
2:00
it holds the theme and pumps some good variety into the track. though I think
2:44
is the strongest part. actually a really good buildup you got going!
I think the intro is a little long. Maybe give the loop only a full bar to establish the theme and bring in the drums and some bass (maybe a filtered reese or a simple tuned 808 on the 1 of each beat)
I think another chord progression with some of those heis's in the draft could give it a nice A-B-A-B style movement with each section getting more and more layered. As of now it's a bit repetitive with the loop almost always being present.
now that i listen to it again i can understand what you mean, i will work on it.
also i like the idea of the 808, maybe i will have it in the first section too instead of just being in the 3rd and 2nd, thanks for the feedback i really needed some for this one