Honestly, I don't think I'm the best person to give critique. But I can give you my perspective.
First off, what's good:
The vocal chops are absolutely stellar, and your choice of samples, foley, and instruments/percussion is on point
What stood out:
The intro chords don't sound as polished as they could've, it just sounds like a raw synth and in my opinion, it takes away from the overall production quality
In fact, the only thing I'd change would be the processing/fx and transitions