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  • k well i fixed it a bit.. please tell me how it is now:)))

  • I realy like the melody, but like Xenon said expand upon it and make it longer.

    Maybe add some like string plucks that harmonize the synth at one point, and once you make the song longer take the rasselbock off the lead.

    And a bridge is a part of the song that kinda follows the same melodic pattern but is like a transition or a break to another part of the song.

  • n sorry what does bridges mean?!

  • lol sorry i wassnt done yet.. but thx.. ill keep u posted when i improve on it more!!

  • I think you have the right idea but you need to just develop on it more, there isn't much of a song here. You need to add repeats and some builds and bridges to really get it sounding like a song. But you do have the right idea. And also try and vary up your rasslebox patters because they can become overwhelming when you repeat them too much.

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