Yeah... I kinda think a really big ass drop would be perfect... what you have whispers in and I feel that it is kinda a let down with such a great build up...
Really the only thing I can say is that part after the intense buildup should have been something crazy big. Like the build but with heavy drums and variation in the chords, maybe a nice melody to go along with it, like a melodic drop or something. Other than that, starstruck as always my dude