Some parts sound a little off to me. Like certain overtones drown out frequencies in the ambient layers. But music is subjective, so that's just my opinion. It's really nice.
alright, i'll write down what i'm hearing as i'm listening to the track:
00:10
ish: intro's a little too quiet. definitely don't come in at full volume, but i shouldn't have to strain to hear the track.
00:29
fuck that's a nice sub, really nice melodies too. the pluck could use a little more of a delay to give it more of that (for lack of a better term) spacious feel.