Hey I took a look into your draft by using the remix function. The notes of the Heisenberg are not harmonic to the stabs you're using in the machiniste.
Same with the pulv that comes in later in the track.
For my taste a bass is missing and you should give more variation to the track.
I tried something in a remix. You can open it and have a look inside. I changed the notes of the Heis and the Pulv, added a bass and a few FX and automation.