decent structure nice selection of sound kalimba notes could be more in sync towards the end. overall pretty good though
at the end of the day if you want them to sound that way, it’s completely fine if you want to keep it as is
Thanks! Not to be all cutting in contrarian but I swear the intention was for them to break up, kinda like windchimes or something where it just kinda blends into sounds. But I totally get it, maybe it would sound better with just tightened up tbh