Ironically I have something called auditory processing disorder, where basically vocals are inaudible for me, I can only hear the background elements and such, while someone's voice is complete gibberish for me. I also have massive sensory issues with music. My mother said I used to go crazy whenever I heard music, when I was younger. With that being said, I've never really had a great relationship with music. Nowadays I cannot listen to music, because it irritates me
They are all roughly in the same key, and I used some of the same instruments as well, at least between the two trap tracks. I'm glad to know that my idea worked though. Thanks for the comments!
There's always room to improve. But yeah, you're good where you are. I'd suggest working on learning how to mix, refine melody writing skills, and drum selection
i honestly like vent tracks like these where sometimes a heavy wavetrap beat is enough to let the audience understand the emotion you're trying to convey