i can see right thru your eyes

i dont need no other lies

stick me up for one last time

why dont you tell me why

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they tried to cut my hair

now my strength is gone

please tell me why

tell me why

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inspired by the tale of samson

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  • lowkey my fav song ive done

  • so good holy, u killed this

    • Ty so much. I listen to a bunch of your stuff for inspo

  • omfg i'm shaking! this is gold!!! but one thing, at 00:40 , the vocal harmonies are drifting way too off. it's kind of irritating though. i will respect this whole song for no hate lol

    • good to know :)

    • Ill just incorporate it into my next track:)

    • Thank you! Yeah im still learning how do vocals the right and way adding harmonies. Thanks for the feedback tho i need it, i probably wont end up recording anything for this cause its such a headache

  • This is the best!

  • ayugh the vocalsss

    • good or bad? :/

      ive listened to myself too much it all sounds like garbo to me now

  • Republished

    added harmony to chorus

    • i like them alot they blend in to the mix nicely

  • that's really great!

  • great stuff, man!

  • Was this what you invited me to last night?

  • oo I like this alot !

    I really like the melody pluck thing and chord synths

    The drums really fit well as well

    I think the vocals fit it really well too ; there is one bit in the vocals though at 1:26 , I think the word 'why' sounds off (nothing a bit of pitch correcting cant fix) but thats the only fault i can really find in this track !

    Just a general nice chill vibe

    • Antares makes Autotune as a vst if I'm not mistaken. Same goes for melodyne, which means you can use it in any DAW that supports vst. But Melodyne can be used stand-alone (both are quite expensive though) and you can mess with the transients at higher upgrades with melodyne, makes it less robotic.

    • oh yeah it sounds a lot better, I dont think it sounds robotic at all though? :) . Oh fl studio plug in, maybe i wont be checking it out then lol

    • fixed it, except it sounds a little more robotic lol

      also pretty sure antares is a plugin for like fl studio, melodyne is a standalone software

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  • man stop making bangers like this! ur putting me to shame, seeing how i still cant pub any songs with vocals cause i cant get em right!

    xDD

    jkjk man this is sick, and keep posting em songs on my wall!

    much love man, keep it up :)

    <3

    • you just gotta go for man, only way you learn in how to improve!

  • this is sick bro

    keep it up <3

    • thanks man, really appreciate it

  • Fuck yessss woooo

  • Sick!