I think the beginning sections out of key parts are a little out there. I know you are trying to do, you have pulled it off well beforehand, but it sounds too off in this.
ooooff the drop is like whoa omg love it, its all perfect idk <3 it sounds so good , maybe a better outro (im not saying that urs is bad and it isnt but it stops suddenly idk its my opinion) would be appreciete it but its awesome :)