Wow really nice ! It's melancholic synthwave, i like it. What could be improved : don't hesitate to introduce sequencies with different chords and high frequencies, it gives more variety, maybe just for a short moment but it will sound like the summit of the music. In fact all depends what feeling you want to communicate through this music. Nice play with the cutoff
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, maybe the drop just after could be blended (like a bigger difference before and after the drop)
(sorry for my broken english, hope you will understand)
i see everything without any high frequencies before (a big cutoff) exept the cymbal wich could have higher frequencies and which could be low-shelfed with a curve
now after the drop i see the contrary : everything with less cutoff (with more high frequencies) and maybe the detuned chords not so loud to avoid clipping