where's the bass? i hear a very weak and merciful bass, that doesn't fit the aggressive vibe of everything else. melody needs more postprocessing like reverb and distortion, vocals are fairly in tempo til the end which i like but aren't mixed very well, kit you used sound very generic but i hear a bit of a groove in there, make sure you make the drum loop longer with more variety in every loop. layer some more elements like a spooky counter melody or smt
