Hey, this is a good start man, definitely check out some of the tutorials on how to use the other tools to write your own synths and beats, it really helped me when I started :)
i like how it shows when someone uses my sample thats pretty cool if you ask me and uprising here is one of two of my favorite artist on audiotool he is amazing check him out! his shit is crazy good! and dont take and dont take what he said personal he is one that will def give you good advice iv learned alot from him
a lot of over used samples here but not a bad ear a little jumbled but hey your learning I did the same stuff when i was learnning :) Welcome to audio tool Keep up the good work : ) .
: here is a tip for you
Dig really hard for samples when you use audio tracks and don't go for the obvious top of the list type stuff
see what i mean.... when you follow or comment/ fav a song its posted up on the home wall or RSS and everyone that follows me will see its a great way to meet ppl and get feedback on your songs....
check me out if you have time im no where close to being good iv only been on here for a little over a month so iv got lots to learn myself but check me out if you like what iv done follow me and comments and favs are always nice :) have fun exploring your artistic side!!!
not bad for your first track! it takes time and alot of effort.... watch tutorials on everything thats what i did and open ppls tracks thats a good way to learn also