In some places at the beginning I think could be better mixed and the elements with the melody can sound a bit offtune
00:49
. I think you could have increased the loudness of the piano in some areas at the beginning when the elements were coming together. Maybe a stereodune? The rest is very nice and clean and the melody is very good!:)
04:41
I think could have come earlier since the track can get a bit too repetitive and maybe a bit more depth to the kicks. I really like the track.