AAAAAH DUDE THIS IS SO GOOD!!! Seriously, I can't get enough of your sounds!!! I'm happy to do collabs with someone so good at that stuff, I'm not the best with that XD
Also, it's nice knowing you were inspired by one of my tracks!
Percussion is flawless! You added the exact right texture to it and everything. Really digging that snare. ;)
Anyway, mixing is important, it's not poorly mixed, but it has room for improvement. Also try adding a sub bass to your chords. If you already did, I can't hear it, Maybe use some distortion (waveshaper pls don't use Tube Distortion) and a fuckton of saturation along with a limiter. There is no mastering at all. Also run your track through a limiter as well (quantum).