I only fav his comment because of the spam part. But listen here every 10 beats you can spam my wall. It's gonna take a little longer than 2 months to get a good ear if you're just starting out.
Well, if you want my honest opinion, I say my first criticism is that you seem to have spamming this all over walls, I see you're relatively new but that is typically fround upon. My second piece of criticism is that your drums have no texture that help alter the overall balance of the track. Your drums also do not fit all to well because this feels forced. You should allow creativity come to you, don't force yourself to work with something just because it sounds decent.