Sounds way better, you have basically got rid of everything I disliked. Quick thing I would point out is that I really like the instant transition at
02:19
but I think the track would benefit if you made a low pass automation + volume down automation for the transition at
01:13
. I think it would produce a great low end to high end transition smoothly
At
00:20
, you can hear the little noises when the bass keys switch with headphones - I think you should get rid of it by using a slope/curve automation. The melodies/ambience is really nice so I would prefer if you added some fast-paced liquid dnb with a punchy kick (not a fan of the kick sample imo) because the drums feel like house from
00:29
to
01:13
However, I love
01:57
to
02:19
but because it is the second drop, probably better to add more drum perks. This is a great track though!