I think the vocal delivery needs some confidence. Find a place where you just feel good and then you can add all of the fx to your voice to get it to the pitch or quality you want to match the track.
The next thing I'd say is that the track needs more or even less to feel more effective. A volume automation cutting out the end of each note to make it sparse and mechanical or a syncopated hat to fill it up even more.
bass sounds great, though! I wouldn't change anything there.
