Fixed the bpm tempo automation, added better transitions like a siren, a riser, impact etc. The drums have some sidechain, and also the kickdrum is extra punchy. And I faded out the song at the end too.
The main melody doesn't have a lot going on in my opinion because you don't have anything on the effect chain. But I'd say that a chorus, reverb and some delay would be cool. Those things would make them sound wider and more interesting. The rasslebock at
00:00
and
00:01
is too random so I would fix that. Some effects on the evil laugh sample would be good. Also make sure when you mix the drums that if something is really loud, you don't make it too loud, it should balance itself.
Go right ahead. But this is your song so I think I should only be guiding you to improve the song, not help you. Because you did the work, not me if you get what I mean. I'll still accept your offer though
not bad. I suggest you ask people for advice who do the genre trap for deep constructive criticism since I am unfamiliar with the genre, haha. In my opinion, starting from
01:33
could be better mixed and there is no specific melody.