Nice, like the bass going through it :) I'm liking the idea of the fx on the vocals at the beginning, but (to me) it's a bit too jarring and noisey on some of the words. The ones with 's's and 't's. You could try chucking on a slope on band pass set to around 2100 freq and a 40hz bandwith. It'll get rid of a lot of the 'white noise', but it does chuck the vocals into the high freqs.....