I didn't read any of the rules. Really tired. I just liked the vocals a lot. I'll come back to this tomorrow.
EDIT: So the mastering isn't perfect, but better. structure issues are fixed as far as I can tell. I'm not looking to win really, just to hopefully impress Uprising and to let the mug know how much I appriciate him :)
On a real note, looking at some of the earlier entries, there are some other artists that deserve their victory well over mine. I'm really impressed by what I've been seeing from everyone!
RE-EDIT: Uhm, I fixed the timing on the vocals a smidge just so they'd fit in with the style some. I really should have took more time on this before I published it. Bad move on my part.
I'll just have to work on that then :) thanks for the sharp ear, I didn't notice that. the kick drum doesn't have a lot of presence. Lets see what my sub-par mastering skills can do there.