Your low end/ low mids are lacking in the mix, so I would suggest making it clean and powerful sounding. For example, use a reference track you enjoy, then insert some EQ, compression, and saturation to get your sub and mid-layers to stand out more.
Oh hell yeah this is my kinda shit. I like the part that goes WeEEHHOo weEHHAAAAHHHOOOO whoOWOHHWHOWOowo WSOW OW OWO WO OWoW OWO Uwu
thanks! the original had a lot of potential, and im a sucker for remix opportunities so i kinda had to remix it :)