I'm not gonna call this a remix, but an edit purely for the fact that I didn't change that much, just the little things I pictured when I first heard this. I kinda like how it turned out, but don't expect anything too wildly different from the original. Enjoy and the chill out :)
Just my opinion ;) It may be indeed you don't change much on the previous, but it well pulled out chill out taste from the original. Added sound of melody might be not fit. If add, it could be better trying more fitting sound color or effects. I think generally it's very difficult to be successful both ambient texture and melody.Anyway very good trying !
nice job man! but you know how that first drum beat comes in with like...tonematrix i think? well, the stabs seem out of place there... maybe having them lie at a low slope frequency and high room space reverb in the beginning and then getting them up to "normal" eventually? that'll be pretty cool i think.