imma be honest. its like you got all the right ingredients but you not doing it just right. i like everything on this track.. except the 808. you got all the other drums almost perfect short of mixing the right volumes and that's about it. but like 808 wise you just have to hear out the right 808 that would fit with the beat and roll with it. i look forward to seeing your progression! maybe you'll see yourself on No Home Brand sometime soon :)