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  • I like that little reverb melody and the fact that you used synths (sad that that seems to be be unique on AT nowadays...) and I like that you tried to implement a lot of variation. Where this track still needs plenty of work is that everything sounds out of key. It sounds like you have 4 different tonalities going on in the track and none of them meet that much. It's pretty fundemental for music and although you can learn this through practice, I'd recommend learning very basic music theory.

    • happy holidaze this track I tried to focus a little less on variations and different tonalites so I think it sounds better overall

    • that's pretty constructive which I appreciate!

      the variations and different tonalites are something I try to make go together but sometimes I can't hear things being slightly out of key/tune. Making chords is probably what takes me the longest to do since I don't have too much experience with automations that probably would make things sound better. Again really appreciate the feedback!!!

    • That could help you understand keys, chords and harmony better. I know this is not too specific or helpful, but once you know how to make 2 to 3 intentional chords, creating something will become a lot easier.

  • Its good though i would like it more if it had some other kind of lead thats more like on going like so it dosent change from one thing to a entire different thing but except that i think it was pretty good also i liked it at 02:14

    also the start was nice

    • favorite part of making this track was 2:14 for sureee

    • I really appreciate your feedback!

      I tend to overthink/over mix when I find certain notes/synths I like so totally valid. Thanks for listening!

  • its ok could have added more bass

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  • Republished

    added more bass and layering

  • and a diff sound

  • Republished

    added some claps

  • I'll comment later

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