I agree with everybody, this is really good for your first time. I honestly wish I was already this good at making tracks from scratch when I first got on AT
Dang, this brings me back to when I published my first track on audio tool. I remember being so psyched, and being so excited. I feel proud of myself for having watched some tutorials and gotten enough of the basics to actually write notes with one of the instruments, instead of just splicing samples. Yours is way better than mine was lol but we all gotta start somewhere
One thing I will say though is that the track feels a bit lengthy. I mean if it's a soundtrack, it makes sense but as a single unit, I think you could probably stop it around the 2 minute 30 second mark. Or at least fill that Gap a bit more. I honestly thought the song was over and it was moving on the next song and then I realized the same song was still playing when the music came back.
i like the stutter thing along with the drums at
2:18
, the flow is pretty cool :) i'd probably add a bass when the drums come in or something like that - maybe like a short stabby bass would work well here. good job! :)