p sweet concept, however that's all it is: a concept. Like with a lot of your tracks, you do a great job setting the base for them but there is still a lot that can be expanded upon. Keep working though man, you'll get there
there’s a ton of room for development which is awesome, but as it is, it left me hanging, like you had just started the exposition of some epic composition (which you have in a way ;) ) but then just abruptly cut it off! eeee i really really hope u expand this into a full piece because it’s an incredible beginning